Life is fun, so it is
It lets me do just as I please
It only moves my love away
It is hard not to go astray
You are the master of my fate
Retrieve me dear, 'fore it is too late
You are too close, you cannot go
I will go down under the flow
The moon is looming in the sky
I look at it and heave a sigh
The night is very cold and damp
Yet i get no comfort from the lamp
The lamp that lit my path so much
Is cold where i need the most its touch
I don't know how, I don't know why
My prospects today are as wry
It was tough enough not too long ago
Yet now i feel its even low
What is it that just hurts me
I wish i knew yet i cant see
What must I do I know too well
Yet to move away hurts more than hell
Love is blind they say, it blinds my love
My fate and hers aren't hand in glove
Is there no hope, i ask myself
In depths of love, again I delve
You are so lucky that I knew
I lose my hope to get my due.
1 comment:
"The night is very cold and damp
Yet i get no comfort from the lamp"
I think the "yet" should be replaced by "and" to make sense. I think. Anyway it's your call.
The rest of the poem is great.
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